Making a kind comment

We are learning what makes a quality blog comment. I have made a comic strip showing how a comment can affect a person’s feelings when they read it.

My vocab

This is my vocab it took 4 day's to make it.It was hard.

Twizel

When  I was in Twizel I went for a coffee with my dad. It was a good coffee I had a hot choclit  .Me and my family went for a walk at mount cook there was lot's of snow.I made a snow man and I sore avalanch. It was real cool. I went fishing with my family Freya caught a fish it was very slimey.It took a long time to catch it and my dad caught a fish too with Mike his friend. I dided like going home.

What I did in Lockdown

We made a Wevideo about what we did in Lockdown.  First we did some writing about what we did and then I used some photos that Mum had sent me from her phone.  Then we made a wevideo by putting the photos in.  We went into the library and read our writing and recorded it.

fliing fox

I love playing on the fliing fox

What I didn't do

My Art

I think my picture look’s amazing in a slide because I worked very hard on it.I think I should get really better at writing and typing because I done a lot of sentences about 12 or 11 .I think I should get a 10 out of 10 for this because I worked really hard, harder than anyone else . I did 13 sentences but the teacher had to delete one or two it's ok.