Thursday, 5 March 2020

My Art

I think my picture look’s amazing in a slide because I worked very hard on it.I think I should get really better at writing and typing because I done a lot of sentences about 12 or 11 .I think I should get a 10 out of 10 for this because I worked really hard, harder than anyone else . I did 13 sentences but the teacher had to delete one or two it's ok.

7 comments:

  1. Kia ora Ava,
    My name is Kieryn and I will be working with Kaniere School to comment on your blog posts over the next two terms.
    You have done a fantastic job creating this blogpost about your piece of artwork, and it is so awesome to hear how enthusiastic you were to do this activity!
    10 sentences is a lot to write, and I cannot believe you put in the extra effort and ended up writing 13 sentences!
    Your teachers must be so proud of you and all of the work you are doing.
    Whenever I do any art projects, it always takes me a super long time. This is because I like everything to be perfect and exactly how I want it.
    How long did this piece of art take you to make?
    You have managed to include so many bright colours in your background, and I really like the way the orange helps the image of you pop out! Did you draw this image yourself, or is it a photo?
    You have done an excellent job! Keep up the great work!
    Nga mihi

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  2. kia ora Kieryn thank you

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  3. amizing i love it i love the oranges a the green.

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  4. cool pickr Ava

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  5. Wow Ava great job on your art work I love all the colours that you used!

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  6. Wow Ava it looks so cool

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