Making a kind comment

We are learning what makes a quality blog comment. I have made a comic strip showing how a comment can affect a person’s feelings when they read it.

My vocab

This is my vocab it took 4 day's to make it.It was hard.

Twizel

When  I was in Twizel I went for a coffee with my dad. It was a good coffee I had a hot choclit  .Me and my family went for a walk at mount cook there was lot's of snow.I made a snow man and I sore avalanch. It was real cool. I went fishing with my family Freya caught a fish it was very slimey.It took a long time to catch it and my dad caught a fish too with Mike his friend. I dided like going home.